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7th November 2023
A Layman's Guide to Christian Growth by Ron Carswell (Published-Amazon)
Mrs. Moczygemba was a reviewer/editor on my recent book, A Layman's Guide to Christian Growth. She served as a development editor, involved in the content of a book, and a line editor, consisting of the language.
She looked at global, big-picture issues, such as sequence of ideas, order of presentation of ideas, incorrect or missing information, repetition of material, and more.
When she did the line edit, she paid attention to the language of the content, not so much its correctness, but its smoothness, and clarity, and variation. She suggested changes made my words flow with speed, grace, accuracy, and simplicity.
She was punctual in returning her review.
-Ron Carswell